You husband steal'n son of a gun
You think you stole him so you won
But just give it a little bit of time
You'll get older and wrinkles will come
Your think black hair will then grey some
And youll know a little of my pain
The smell of perfume will enter the door
And youll find make up on all his clothes
And a little fuss will bring the papers on
Youll lose your husband like I lost mine
And then youll be left there cryin
And nothin will be done
I know youll feel the pain youve caused
So you can take him I dont care
It will be your heart ache in a couple of years
And in the end you will know I've won
I wish you the best of luck
But luck wont help his erges of lust
And that is how this story always ends
I stole him and made him mine
Then you took him in just a matter of time
Justice will always prevail
His ex-wife is laughin now
And pretty soon I'll be at her side
Then you can join us in a couple years
We'll sit back in rockin chairs
Laughin at wife number four
What do you think of this song I wrote? Its suppose to be in the country genre?
It's juvenile and it just plain sucks really bad.
What do you think of this song I wrote? Its suppose to be in the country genre?
It needs a hook........a chorus and some of your lines dont rhyme. Work on it. Get your point across with a good hook and not so many words
What do you think of this song I wrote? Its suppose to be in the country genre?
It preety good work on it a little more I think you can do better
What do you think of this song I wrote? Its suppose to be in the country genre?
rele good...needs a catchy tune or chorus
What do you think of this song I wrote? Its suppose to be in the country genre?
this is a good song but it is not happening with every people
What do you think of this song I wrote? Its suppose to be in the country genre?
It's okay. But you probably should separate the chorus from the verses and the lyrics need to have more words that rhyme. But it is pretty alright actually.
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