Poems, Music without sound,,,,,,,,,, LADIES read,, :) cheers, :)?

Train comes round the bend"

The train comes round the bend,, hear the whistle blow,

passing Thru a maze of daisies.. like you,, they seem to glow.

The train she whistles thru the great divide,can you feel the wind,

wheat flourishes in yellow's, browns, where we meet in sunset's dim.

There we meet as we melt into one soul,, can you feel the heat?

been waiting all my life for that whistle to blow,, it's only you I wish to meet.

Your black hair shines likes milk and honey,, your eyes light the field ablaze,

wishing in my dream of dreams,,, it's all of you ,,, that slumbers our new days.

The train comes round the bend,, hear the whistle blow,it's you I wish to hold,, it's you I want to know.

Listen to the sound,, that rings deeply in your ears, stop and feel me wrapped around you,, it's ME,, that deeply cares,

Stop and feel the daisies,,, the ones I set upon your face,,,

I make a bed of wheat%26amp; honey,, and special kind of place..

This train may run of tracks,, but my soul will never stop,, listen to this whistle blow,

it is you I wish to ,,, attract....... Till train runs out of tracks....

Poems, Music without sound,,,,,,,,,, LADIES read,, :) cheers, :)?

Beautiful. Brought tears to my eyes. Thank you. Keep up the good work.

Poems, Music without sound,,,,,,,,,, LADIES read,, :) cheers, :)?

are you in love with a particular person???

Poems, Music without sound,,,,,,,,,, LADIES read,, :) cheers, :)?

thats wicked good did u write it ur self!!! wow keep writing u will be so famous!!!

Poems, Music without sound,,,,,,,,,, LADIES read,, :) cheers, :)?

do u have feeling for someone???.. u met her in the train...lol

keep writing.... its nice..

Poems, Music without sound,,,,,,,,,, LADIES read,, :) cheers, :)?

so romantic.. keep up the good work...lol..

Poems, Music without sound,,,,,,,,,, LADIES read,, :) cheers, :)?

I like this one it has some of the sections from another poem you wrote I believe the feel the heat part. I hope im right.LOL But it's really good I noticed that although you used repetition you used it in the right spots at the right time which made it sound really nice and it was flowing. So good work.